Ryan - ensure that you work on the following to improve the quality of your planning:
1. Genre - improve your analysis of the video that you analysed for genre conventions - expand the sections on mise-en-scene, editing, camerawork to make clear how a video of this genre is different from other genres - you also need to explain how this genre uses narrative/ performance
2. Analyses for ancillaries are too brief - analyse them to at least the same level of detail you analysed the magazines in Y11 - comment on use of visuals (and meanings / connotations created), text size, style, colour, layout features - you need to make it clear exactly what to expect for both ancillaries.
3. Post-modernism - needs an analysis of an example of a post modern video - make sure you explore the way it uses intertextual links in detail.
4. Add a post detailing what videos and other media texts have inspired you and how.
Make sure you give detailed posts to get to grade C and above and use a range of ICT to present it.
Ryan - ensure that you work on the following to improve the quality of your planning:
ReplyDelete1. Genre - improve your analysis of the video that you analysed for genre conventions - expand the sections on mise-en-scene, editing, camerawork to make clear how a video of this genre is different from other genres - you also need to explain how this genre uses narrative/ performance
2. Analyses for ancillaries are too brief - analyse them to at least the same level of detail you analysed the magazines in Y11 - comment on use of visuals (and meanings / connotations created), text size, style, colour, layout features - you need to make it clear exactly what to expect for both ancillaries.
3. Post-modernism - needs an analysis of an example of a post modern video - make sure you explore the way it uses intertextual links in detail.
4. Add a post detailing what videos and other media texts have inspired you and how.
Make sure you give detailed posts to get to grade C and above and use a range of ICT to present it.